Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Emotion in Poetry: Analogy

According to Prentice Hall's Writer's Companion, an Analogy is an extended comparison in which one thing, usually more familiar, is compared to something less familiar. A striking Analogy can make a commonplace subject come alive with new meaning.

Therefore, if I compare a school with a hill of ants, I've created an Analogy, if I make the comparison long enough.

However, we shouldn't confuse Analogy with metaphor or simile. An Analogy is an extended comparison, not one of just two or a few more words. In Poetry, an Analogy is often the complete poem. Some people consider an Analogy an extended metaphor.

Let's examine a poem by Amy Lowell which uses the Analogy of mares with night clouds. By describing the Imagery of mares, she creates the word picture of clouds on a moon lit night.

Night Clouds
by Amy Lowell

The white mares of the moon rush along the sky
Beating their golden hoofs upon the glass Heavens;
The white mares of the moon are all standing on their hind legs
Pawing at the green porcelain doors of trhe remote Heaves.
Fly, Mares!
Strain your utmost.
Scatter the milky dust of stars,
Or the tiger sun will leap upon you and destroy you
With one lick of his vermillion tongue.

(from Prentice Hall's Literature Platinum)

Also note the comparison of the sun with a tiger.

A few of my poems are analogies. I would like to share at least two with you:

Dreary Day

The dreary day outside is gray
Without even a hint of sun.
Clouds drag where our dreams once lay ,
Trying to destroy everyone's fun.

Without even a hint of sun,
No rainbow can grace the sky.
Trying to destroy everyone's fun,
The storm drives laughter awry.

No rainbow can grace the sky
With drab rain falling, never done.
The storm drives laughter awry
Before the tears have begun.
With drab rain falling, never done,
Clouds drag where our dreams once lay
Before the tears have begun.
The dreary day outside is gray.
(copyright 2005 by Vivian Gilbert Zabel)

Dreary Day compares the dreary day to sorrow. Tears are rain; grayness and lack of sunshine equals missing joy.

Day's Journey

The day dawns as a journey.
One leaves the station on a train,
Rushing past other places
Without a pause or stop,
Watching faces blur as they pass,
No time to say goodbye.
On and on the train does speed
Until the line's end one sees,
Another sunset down
Without any lasting memories .
(copyright 2005 by Vivian Gilbert Zabel)

Days Journey lets us view life as a train ride, one day's travel at a time.

Hopefully you will now be able to use Analogy in your Poetry, as an aid in enhancing Emotion, or as a way to increase Imagery.

Vivian Gilbert Zabel taught English, composition, and creative writing for twenty-five years, honing her skills as she studied and taught. She is a author on Writers (http://www.Writing.Com/), and her portfolio is http://www.Writing.Com/authors/vzabel. Her books, Hidden Lies and Other Stories and Walking the Earth, can be found through Barnes and Noble or Amazon.com.


Author:: Vivian Gilbert Zabel
Keywords:: Poetry,Alliteration,Emotion,Imagery,Analogy
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Penny Pinching Paul

Penny pincher Paul
Come on ya'll
I'm not that bad
I save sometimes
And spend other times
What's so wrong
With saving a dime?
Money after all
Amounts to irretrievable time.
At least it gives me
More to write about in my rhyme.
Yes, I drive my wife crazy sometimes
When I turn off the fan
After she leaves the room
Turn off the lights
When she's out of sight
Turn off the dripping faucet
Before I say good-night
But as for me
It feels alright
Besides I treat her right
By no means
Am I being trite
I took her to Paris and Nice
Oh, with that you I could entice
Perhaps you don't know
Nice is not pronounced nice
Nevertheless I took her elsewhere
To other places too
Down Under to the Taronga zoo
So before you criticize
Tell me what your honey
Has done for you?
I Amsterdam
My Dutch darling
Did that with me too
And the Grand Casino
In Monte Carlo, Monaco
Though our money there
We surely did not blow
Then of course
We had a honeymoon
In the islands of Fiji
I guess by now
You're starting to like me
Or maybe hate me
Out of jealousy
That matters not to me
Cause I'm happy in my own skin
Happy to just be me
Whether I'm pinching pennies
Or frivolously spending dollars
Being praised
Or getting hollers
Penny pinching Paul
Some may erroneously call
If they do
They fully don't know me
Cause I both save and spend
Cautiously and wholeheartedly!

Paul Davis is the founder of Dream-Maker Ministries (DMM), a nonprofit organization that is committed to building dreams, breaking limitations and reviving nations.

Paul's compassion for people & passion to travel has taken him to over 50 countries of the world where he has had a tremendous impact. Paul has served people in war-torn, impoverished regions of the earth.

Paul worke d at Ground Zero the first week of 911; helped in genocide plagued Rwanda and Burundi; addressed Muslims in Pakistan; and served in Banda Aceh, Indonesia (the tsunami epicenter). Paul connects well cross-culturally with all peoples, values each individual as a unique treasure, and transcends barriers that divide.

Paul is the author of several books including Breakthrough for a Broken Heart; A State of Emergency; and God vs. Religion. He is also a masterful poet.

Charitable contributions are always welcome. All gifts are tax exempt with the IRS.

Dream-Maker Ministries PO Box 684 Goldenrod, FL 32733 USA

http://www.DreamMakerMinistries.com - RevivingNations@yahoo.com - 407-967-7553


Author:: Paul Davis
Keywords:: penny pinching,Paul Davis,Frugality,save money,Love,Romance,Humor,Laughter,Idiosyncrasies,Peculiar
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Gone Fishing

New Clients more Sales higher Profits in our minds. It's early in the morning the sun has not yet begun to rise. You wake with excitement while you remove the sleep from your eyes. Opportunity all around us we start to think as we stand up and rise.

We have memories of our past days gone by with our efforts & results behind us; good, bad or otherwise. In a world so full of abundance an opportunity catching the big fish should be so easy.

We make our way down to the kitchen with a nice hot breakfast, coffee and its now time to prepare for our mission. Making Sales are like fishing and this makes it fun for the whole day. We stock our vessel with rods, reels, tackle and bait. Im sure this stuff will make them bite like hungry trout out on the lake.

Brochures, presentations, power point s lides and more; can you feel that mighty thunderous river with its mighty roar. The sun light shines down on the city streets. The hustle and bustle of peoples busy feet. You make it to your beginning destination you see it as perfection a perfect place to start your day.

You grab some tackle, your trusty rod and reel; you begin to head out and make your first cast onto the water to get a feel. Its perfect the first cast of the day. The fish are jumping all around you know that soon your catch will be found.

A couple of nibbles and then one big bite man this is a huge one can you feel the fight? Hes running fast and fleeing right as you get him in your sights. You loosen the drag and give him some slack you know that hell soon be back.

Alas success it is mine you see the 1st catch of the day what a great feeling. Do we pack it in and go on home or do we string him up and go looking for more. You scour your way through the forest all day long laughing and si nging the whole way. Its no matter what happens to me this day.

You may have won this battle today, come hell or high water well go fishing again someday soon. Youve had great days and some kind of sad but even the best Salesmen and women in the world have felt had.

Sometimes you fish and fish all day long with the best hooks, lines and sinkers; yet you still go home tired and empty handed. These are the days you just feel either happy or upset and abandoned. Yet we all strive to live and fish another day, for it is us fisherman who know how the game is played.

I've been fishing since I was a kid. You know some days can really make you flop your lid. Just resting the reel no matter how you might feel. Tomorrow is another day and one more step closer to the big deal.

Ryan Wegman
CEO TABR Financial Services & TABRfin Publishing
Please drop me a line anytime. Go and visit me at www.raise-my-fico-score.com

Also for expert mortgage advice com e by my office anytime www.teamreserve.com/ryan.loan Until then I'll see you at the lake


Author:: Ryan Wegman
Keywords:: Sales, Profits, Customers, Clients
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Difficult Times

I am walking in my normal Life now, Difficult Times ahead. The Times working in my Life, I cannot stretch how far theyll go.
Existed for many generations upon this earth, how many more Times do I have left. I ask for salvation, I ask for strength, the only thing I seem to receive is a loss of wisdom.
My wisdom is strong, my knowledge is deep, I know the simple facts of Life. Many men try to understand what I have to say, but only some take the time to listen.
All I ask is for access back, down the path, into salvation of the mortal The only thing I ever wanted was access to the portal.
My writing strengthens, my heart grows, and it all begins with the path of the Woman and the great love that shows.
She walks, she works, she talks, she speaks, she looks and listens; the Life begins with True Love. Which in essence is the signs of a true dove.
Her hair in the sky, her hair as bright as thy, walking, working and shaking her beauty to the left, to the right, I know now nothing guides me as much as her.

Nick Jacob
http://www.electronicsathome.com


Author:: Nick Jacob
Keywords:: Difficult, Life, Times
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A Conjugal Curse

She craves but to savor a tender Lovers` kiss,
and sense the rush of rapture it could bring;
Masked behind the cloak of marital bliss
Unfettered fervor latent lay below a wedding ring.

After the dowry came a deluge of deepening disturb
In-laws enter with contrived smiles ready to unfold
Her starving hearts feelings she can never curb
Her frozen gaze reveals a million truths untold

Her ravenous eyes are famished
The honeymoon has vanished
A thorny contract for life of ill-design
From whose fate she cannot resign

Her yearning lips and a throbbing heart need ignition
Ill-begotten in-laws perform a fake rendition
From fiery claws a smoke is bellowing
If only she could get rid of them with a magic spell
Existences affliction may become a bearable living hell

Eyes utter the words that her husband is blinded to tell
A suppressed mind conceals what the spirit knows too well< br> Smiles on her lips disperse the glower of a hearts desire
Laughter on the lips spread the tears that eyes conspire

Oh, chaste wither away! And set her Lust free--
held incarcerated, long ago a romance ceased to be
to whisper a hymn of Infidelity,

Making Love to another spiced her spirit, tickled her soul
Veiled passions, secreted attractions taking on their toll
A forbidden conjugal intrusion
Vows from an altar mere rhetorical illusion
Yesterdays torment of a paranoid delusion

Till death do us part, for better or for worse?
Ringing hollow promises echoing a nuptial curse
He brings home the living. He controls the purse
Alone, this naked jewel shivering of cold
No one to have. No one to hold.

Woman might be fickle; yes this is true
she`ll eavesdrop on her heart to justify
the Lusting for a flame to flicker anew
of a poignant passion she can`t deny.

Vows have anchored and subjugated many stormy seas,
She`d steer them all away for feelings just like these.

Ozer Khalid has trekked the 4 continents of our globe and has dabbled in investment banking, the law, enterprise and events management. Ozer is an avid linguist, traveller, cineaste, and horse-back rider.


Author:: Ozer Khalid
Keywords:: Ozer, Khalid, Love, Anger, Marriage, Divorce, Poem, Infidelity, Lust,
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Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Letter to My Mother

For my Mom,

My heart is missing something that words can't express
I feel like my life has been taken from my chest
All the lonely nights I cry myself to sleep
I try so hard not to but still, I do weep
I try to be be strong and not let the tears fall
It never really works not ever at all
You were my everything my Mother my friend
I always thought you would live till the end
I know that you're with me every minute of the day
I just wish I could hug you, one more time I pray
I have a little girl she is growing so fast
I wish you could have seen her before you passed
I named her Madison she has pretty blue eyes
She always comforts me when I cry
I just got Remarried you would love him to death
When you saw how handsome he is it would just take your breath
He loves us more than words can say
He wishes that he could have met you someday
He makes me so happy and Madison does to
But I am missing someone important that someone is you
I just had to tell you what was going on
And let you know I always think of you and love you mama (dawn)

M. Floyd is an up and coming artist at Wongaa.com. You may like to visit and read more of her work at: http://wongaa.com/album1022.htm


Author:: Mellissa Floyd
Keywords:: Mother, Daughter, Remarried
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The Blue Valley The Mighty Sore Foot & The Wankas of Arwaturo Ruins (In English and Spanish)

IN Spanish and English

In The Blue Valley of the Sierras
(Of Peru)

(Forenoon)) An old mans spring day))

Sounds of the San Jeronimo creek
In the Mantaro Valley of Peru
Rushing down the Mountainside
And sorry I could not climb her,
And looking up, as far as I could
To where an old brick oven stood,
Now abandoned,
Resting amongst the underbrush,
Then I looked to its side
Just as far, and
Surely not the better view
It was of rock and dirt,
And of need of no wear,
But for passing or climbing
They were both worn about the same.

(Here the Rio can talk to one,
If their soul is at peace.)

(Afternoon)) An old mans Spring Day.))

And this afternoon, equally lay
In the Blue Valley
Along the Quichuay Rio
In the grass, all trodden down:
Two women washing cloths.
Oh, I kept no thinking for another day
And said to Mini and Rosa:
I shall be telling this story
One day with a sigh,
And others, in ages hence
That war, with all its destruction!!
Has not been heard of here,
Nor changed the face of the land.

Perhaps it will remain that way,
It would make all the difference,
For another day.

Written in the Mantaro Valle of Peru, 8-11-06 (No: 1420)

Poetic Note: The Blue Valley, a peaceful place in the Sierras. Here I asked a young boy to wash my car, and guard it while eating trout, along the Rio, he never heard of the internet. The hogs, chickens, donkeys, dogs and a fat old pig just grazing around the restaurant, along the riverside. Here I think the only worry man has is when he will eat, sleep and make love. There are no phones, TVs, but Im sure things will change, and perhaps that is the theme of the poem.

Spanish Versin
Translated by Nancy Pealoza
Edited by Rosa Pealoza de Siluk

En el Valle Azul de la Sierra
(De Per)

(Medio da) (Un da de primavera del ancian o))

Sonidos del riachuelo de San Jernimo
En el Valle del Mantaro del Per
Bajando de prisa la Ladera
Y lo siento no pude treparla,
Y mirando hacia arriba, tan lejos como pude
Hacia donde un viejo horno de ladrillos estaba,
Ahora abandonado,
Descansando entre la maleza,
Entonces mir hacia su costado
Justo tan lejos, y
Seguramente no la mejor vista
Este era de roca y tierra,
Y de necesidad de no usarlo
Pero para pasarlo o treparlo
Ambos estaban gastados casi lo mismo

(Aqu el ro puede hablarle a uno,
si su alma est en paz)

(En la tarde)(Un da de primavera del anciano)

Y esta tarde, igualmente yace
En el valle azul
A lo largo del ro Quichuay
En el pasto, todo pisoteado
Dos mujeres lavando ropas
Oh, no guarde pensamiento para otro da
Y dije a Mini y Rosa;
Contar esta historia
Un da con un suspiro,
Y otros, de aqu en aos
Esa guerra, con toda su destrucc in!!
No ha sido oda por aqu,
Ni cambi la faz de la tierra.

Talvez este permanecer de esa forma,
Esto hara toda la diferencia,
Para otro da.

Escrito en el Valle del Mantaro del Per 11-Agosto-2006 (N: 1420)

Nota Potica: el Valle Azul, un lugar lleno de paz en la Sierra. Aqu, le ped a un muchacho que lavara mi carro, y cuidarlo mientras comamos trucha, junto al ro, el jams escuch acerca de la Internet. Los cerdos, gallinas, burros, perros y viejos puercos gordos rasguando alrededor del restaurante, a lo largo de la rivera del ro. Aqu pienso que la nica preocupacin que el hombre tiene es cuando comer, dormir y har el amor. No hay telfonos, televisores, pero estoy seguro que las cosas cambiarn, y talvez ese es el tema del poema.

The Mighty Sore Foot

The foot, the foot, the foot
Can be a mighty thing,

The foot, the foot, the foot
Supports everything.

But when its sore,
One seems helpless.

The foot, the foot, the foot:
And thats another thing!

8-12-06, written in the Mantaro Valley, in Huancayo, Peru. 1421

Dedicated to Mary Sophie (nine-years old), for giving me a sore foot rub, and soak in the water;

Spanish Versin
Translated by Nancy Pealoza
Edited by Rosa Pealoza de Siluk

El Enorme Dolor de Pie

El pie, el pie, el pie
Puede ser una enorme cosa,

El pie, el pie, el pie
Soporta todo.

Pero cuando est adolorido
Uno parece impotente.

El pie, el pie, el pie.
Y eso es otra cosa!

12-Agosto-2006, escrito en el Valle del Mantaro, en Huancayo, Per.

Dedicado a Maria Sofa (de nueve aos de edad), por darme una frotacin para mi dolor de pie, y remojarlo en agua.

The Wanka:and the Arwaturo Ruins (of Peru)

(Urpurampi & the God Huallallo Carhuancho)

Over looking Laguna ahuinpuquio
from the mountain-top
where resides
Las Ruins De Arwaturo,
one can vis ualize the Wanka
walking, talking, ruling, and storing their grains:
cloths, corn, potatoes, olluco y masgua
(storing them in graneros, the towering ancient ruins)
alongside and within this Valley-region, of beauty.

Here the dark-breathe, that rests
underneath the belly of the rain-clouds
are sucked to and upon the tops of the mountains,
within its gorges and crevasses,
making shadows upon its breasts.
This is the land of the Wankas.

Cultural Commentary: The Wanka culture was founded by Urpurampi, and the God was Carhuancho, in the Man- taro Valley Region. They used to sacrifice the dog, after the sacrifice of the dog, they ate him. The skull of the dog was used for a horn during time of war. The culture predates the Inca culture. The Wankas were warriors, and used lances and shields, also porras, and Hondas (like King David used); and they were rebels who sought their liberty. They took advantage of the rain, to gro w the many fruits and vegetables within their valley regions. They also so had herds of llamas and alpacas: from these two animals, they made there sandals. Arwaturo, the name of the ruins, means: burnt bones. The Wanka culture dates from 800 AD to 1400 AD. The Arwaturo ruins, of which Ive climbed, are up some 11,318 feet.

Dedicated to Cesar (of TV Cable), Joseito Arrieta (of Radio Sabor Mix) and Diego Veliz (2006Candidate for Mayor of Huancayo, Peru))(No: 1422; 8-13-2006; written after visiting the site.))

See Dennis' web site: http://dennissiluk.tripod.com


Author:: Dennis Siluk
Keywords:: Poetry
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Three Love Poems all wicked

Advance: Mr. Dennis Siluk's Poetry can have its fire-hearted twists: as with 'Lovers'...', and 'Death...' and the 'Loves's Curse';but love can carry with it, luring assets, especially in these three poems, as you will soon see; two of which he calls sonnets. He sings a dim song, but it all seems to fit in the river of bitter waters; or salty waters. Be that as it may, they are worth the adventure in reading them, weary as they may be. For those interested, his new book of poems will be out in weeks, Spell of the Adnes, it will be a charming book. Rosa Penaloza

Loves December
[or: Decembers Sonnet

Love died here

Songs ago;
Oer her breasts,

Two-faced soul,
Roses throw;

No more tears;

By and by,
Poppies near!

By and by,
Decber tears

To Dea ths King

Does not die!
Wakes when white

Decembers high!

#731/ 6/12/05

Deaths Sonnet

Day has flown!

Dim with gray
The winds sway

The Hells moan
Stand alone!

For this day

Is your repay
And atone!

Rare I know,
Life was so

Through the halls

Of the Hell,
Echoes dreams

Of Heaven!

#732 6/12/05

Lovers Curse

Lovers are
Slipper than ice
This I know to be true

They pretend to be nice,
As you like,
And rip your heart
In two!

If it were not so
Theyd let you go
And let you know
That youre
Neither last, nor first

But they dont
And wont:

This is the lovers curse.

#730/6/10/2005

Author/Poet: Dennis Siluk http://dennissiluk.tripod.com


Author:: Dennis Siluk
Keywords:: Poetry
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Poetry Forums: Navigating the Cybernetic Nebulae

What to Search

Poetry falls just short of celebrities, spam, porn and Internet marketing in the vast continuum of cyber-space searches. That means Poetry is surprisingly popular on the Internet. Finding a Poetry community to share your works won't be an overly difficult task; however, finding one that fits your specific aim can get you feeling as though you are a character in the not-yet made movie, Lost in Cyberspace.

There are several types of forums for different types of poets.

  • The show-and-tell
  • The hard-core critique
  • The ghost town forum
  • The ego trogh
  • no-spell-ums 4ums

The Show-and-Tell

If you are not particularly interested in having your work dissected by the serious critique forum, but you'd like to share your poetic experiences, perhaps you should look for a show-and-tell. These are communities where the members will give casual feedback on Poetry, and usually, the feedback is heavily centered on the theme of the poem rather than the process of the poem.

The Hard-Core Critique

If you aren't prepared or experienced in getting serious critique on your Poetry, you might be taken aback by these types of forums. The members will give you their honest thoughts on your piece, and you'll soon find out that a first time post rarely yields strictly positive comments.

A good critique forum will have members who read a lot of Poetry and actually know what to look for in a good piece. These folks will comment on your structure, internal rhyme, general rhyme, awkward wording, abstract and concrete imagery, and your overall cohesion. You don't have to blindly follow the members' advice, but arguing and rationalizing the flaws in your poem will get you nowhere. Also, keep in mind, that a good critic will also point out the strengths in a poem, so it isn't all that scary.

Also, your poem might go unnoticed until you give a few well-tho ught comments on other members' Poems. People can sometimes be apprehensive about giving a good critique to a poem until they know how that person critiques a poem.

The Ghost Town Forum

You probably won't want to join this forum, but it can have it's benefits. A Ghost Town forum is a forum that doesn't seem to have very many members. What, you may ask, could possibly be the benefit of this? Well, it's a clean slate. If you know of other poets who have the same aim as you, you can invite them to the forum. You can lead discussions and critiques in a style that will benefit those who do have the same aim as you.

Also, some ghost towns are actually very new. Some of them might quickly shoot up in popularity, and if you decide to stay with the forum, you can oftentimes build long-time rel ationships with the members.

The Ego Trough

There are forums out there where the sole purpose seems to give other poets a pat on the back. No, wait, where the poets are searching for pats on the back. It might feel pretty good to post your poem on a forum and get a response such as Wow, this is so great. You're talented. I can so relate to this. Keep in mind that there is usually very minimal feedback going on in these forums, and a lot of times, it seems that the praise is generated in hopes of having someone come back and praise their own Poems.

Some of these Ego Troughs were created by poets who were hoping to showcase their own Poetry. For many, Poetry is the ultimate expression of the soul, so the fact that people are hoping to garner a plethora of praise is understandable. The b enefit of such a forum is that it can make you feel good about yourself, and it can help you to gain the confidence you want in order to move forward with your Poetry. The consequence is that you might never develop the actual art and process of Writing a good poem.

The No Spell-ums 4ums

There are some forums out there that seem to be developed by the youth of cyberspace. Unless you are a teenager (and even then), I really don't see much use of these kinds of forums. These are the forums where even the Poetry uses that new-fangled text-speak. Responses to these Poems are even in text-speak, you know, Ur so gr8! I cringe at the idea of a poem that uses that kind of language, unless it is a parody or something.

I suppose Poetry is relative, and even Poetry spans the meaning and spelling o f words.

The Bottom Line

Before posting your Poetry in a Poetry forum, lurk around a bit. Also, the very first thing you should do is determine what you really want to get out of a Poetry forum. If you are really uber serious about developing your work, perhaps you should search for a closed community, but email the moderator and ask a lot of questions before jumping in. You can join one of those closed communities before posting your work, too. Check out the site and look at the things the other members are saying.

Here is a final list of things to consider when searching for a community:

  • The Member Size. A REALLY big member base can have your poem lost in a matter of seconds.
  • Publicity. If it is an open forum, even non-members can read your poem. Do you really want or mind that?
  • Sign in or not? Even open forums usually require a member sign-in. If not, the forums may be subject to flamings and spam.
  • Paid Memb ership? You might wince at the idea of paying for something you can get for free; however, a paid membership can filter out those who aren't serious. Just be sure to ask a lot of questions before paying the doe (which shouldn't be much more than $30 a year.)


Author:: Devrie Paradowski
Keywords:: Poetry forums, Poetry communities, Poetry, Writing, Writing forums, Writing community, Poems
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Modern Haiku Poetry What It is and How to Write It

The venerable Haiku poem has been around for hundreds of years. Traditionally composed in Japan using a 5-7-5 arrangement of syllables, western poets have loosened this form to create what is now considered modern Haiku Poetry.

The modern version still sounds somewhat similar to the original but it does not adhere to making the syllables come out to 5-7-5. This is a good thing! It frees the poet up to explore what is truly important in Haiku writing and that is its spirit!

To write modern Haiku Poetry one needs to know the technique behind it and that has everything to do with understanding fragment and phrase theory for Haik u today is composed using this technique. For example, take a look at this modern Haiku poem:

summer mist --
sap trickles
down the pine

Here we have a Haiku consisting of a fragment and a phrase. The fragment summer mist gives us a macro view while the phrase sap trickles down the pine shows us a specific detail. To write modern Haiku Poetry, you don't really need to know more than this. Really.

Notice that emphasis is not on the syllable count. Emphasis here is on the poem itself. But the poem retains the essence of what Haiku is because it is created using fragment/phrase technique.

Notice too that this poem's subject is nature. Haiku, if it's about anything, is about naturehow we see it and how we feel about it. The above poem simply describes an event happening in the pre sent moment - another trademark of Haiku Poetry. Modern Haiku Poetry doesn't seek to transform what Haiku is or the beauty of it, it just doesnt care so much about counting syllables!

Edward Weiss is a poet, author, and publisher of Wisteria Press. He has been helping students learn how to write Haiku for many years and has just released his first book Seashore Haiku! Sign up for free daily Haiku and get beautiful Haiku poems in your inbox each morning! Visit http://www.wisteriapress.com for Haiku books, lessons, articles, and more!


Author:: Edward A. Weiss
Keywords:: modern Haiku Poetry,Haiku,Haiku Poetry,Haiku poems,Poetry,modern Poetry
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Sunday, October 28, 2012

Love Never Fails

Love melts every heart

It patiently endures

Every fiery dart

That seeks to destroy

Because love does not employ

Vengeance or hate

Love is patient

It knows how to wait

While it meanwhile

Believes the best

Withstanding every test

Tribulation and trial

Willing to go the extra mile

Love embodies

The nature of God

Awakes the heavenly hosts

Is humble

Not quick to boast

Is ready to sacrifice

Twenty-four seven

Purging out all fatal leaven

That pollutes and binds the soul

Because the love from above

It makes us whole

It enables us to forgive

It enables us to give

It enables us to live.

So onward Christian soldier!

The love of the Lord is your anthem,

< p>Your victory

Your battle cry

Without it you die.

Though Faith makes all things possible

Love makes all things easy.

Because humanity must see

We must continue diligently

To radiate this unconditional love

Which rejoices in truth

Never is uncouth

Lest we offend

Those to whom we are called

To free and loose

Such a love

Captivates the hardest heart

Surpasses intelligence

With skillful art

Manifesting divine diplomacy and tact

Always sensitive and aware

Knowing how one should act

Avoiding the compulsion

To react

Resort to an attack

Graciously instead

It takes momentary flak

Prefering the other

Above themself

Choosing rather

To die to self

To rejoice in others

Help sisters and brothers

Give space

And not smother

Rembering that our time

It is precious

No need therefore

To be capricious

Impetuoous

Explosive and ridiculous

For life is short

Let us therefore pray hard

Lest sloth overtake us

And we become

Sluggish as lard

Love is far better

For thy heart and thy life

Therefore purpose within

To eliminaite

Contention and strife

Friend, walk in love

Enjoy newness of life!

Paul Davis is a life coach (relational & professional), traveling minister and fitness trainer. Paul is the author of several books including Breakthrough for a Broken Heart; Stop Lusting; and God vs. Religion.

Paul is a popular worldwide keynote speaker, creative consultant, humor being, explorer, mediator, minister, liberator and dream-maker.

Paul's compassion for people & passion to travel has taken him to ove r 50 countries of the world where he has had a tremendous impact. Paul has also brought revival to many in war-torn, impoverished and tsunami stricken regions of the earth. His nonprofit organization Dream-Maker Ministries is building dreams and breaking limitations.

Paul's Breakthrough Seminars inspire, revive, awaken, impregnate with purpose, impart the fire of desire, catapult people into a new level of self-awareness, facilitate destiny discovery and dream fulfillment.

Contact Paul to minister, speak at your event or for life coaching: RevivingNations@yahoo.com 407-967-7553.

For additional info: http://www.DreamMakerMinistries.com, http://www.CreativeCommunications.TV


Author:: Paul Davis
Keywords:: love never fails,Endurance,Romance,Faith,God,Religion,life in Christ,Patience,Spir ituality,Jesus,God
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How To Write A Beautiful Poem

What Is Bad Poetry?

By bad Poetry, I, by no means am referring to work which is amateurish or unpolished. I see poems every day on the forums which have typos, poor phrasing, and insufficient imagery. That's fine. I love some of those poems! I love the ones where you can sense that the Poet really means it! And, you know, there's just no faking that. When one is writing about a person, experience, or anything that significantly altered her, the piece dazzles like a kaleidoscope in the sun.

Sometimes I'll read one of those poems repeatedly, and it will just keep knocking me on my ass. There is something so intrinsically wonderful about writing a poem which is heArtfelt. Somehow, even the untalented, and, in extreme cases, borderline illiterate will find a way to sing in verse. That seems to be some type of divine intervention: a balancing act which intervenes to allow anyone to communicate felicitously--if only those sentiments matter enough to them. Yes, indeed , there is something very wonderful in this, and each will find her own way.

Thelonious Monk Said

It's interesting that a Thelonious Monk quotation should demand my attention now. And, on second thought, what could possibly be more fitting? Monk, of course, was a black American genius, which, as I've written elsewhere, may very well be the reason why so few Americans know his name. In a more perfect world (and that world is coming!) we would have a national holiday to celebrate this musical mastermind, but, let me stay on point (though, it's often fun not to : ) )...

Thelonious Monk said, I compose my piece with a formula I created myself...I find inspiration in myself. And, that's what I'm talking about! What is it about your life that is your source of inspiration? What really matters to you? Whatever it may be, choose it as the material you Write about. That, in my humble opinion, should be the foundation of Creative writing. Determine where your heArt l ies, and you will have an endless supply of material.

Different Levels Of Literalness

So, to illustrate the point, let's consider three Poets who wrote very differently: Langston Hughes, Pablo Neruda, and Wallace Stevens. These three Poets so well represent the literal-to-abstract spectrum, and, all three are marvelous...some of my absolute favorites. I don't think it's possible to say which is definitively the best, which is the whole point of this: they wrote differently; each wrote like only he could Write, and thus comparisons of quality lose absolute meaning and become more a matter of personal taste. So, let's take a look at a poem from each Poet to explore this issue in greater detail.

Langston Kicks It On The Level

I remember when I first read Langston Hughes: I was fifteen, and an Artist I knew out in Manhattan had one of the paperbacks in his studio. I read the book and it had that quality about it: that visceral sting that indicates the rea l thing. Here is one of Langston's poems:

Cross

My old man's a white old man
And my old mother's black.
If ever I cursed my white old man
I take my curses back.

If ever I cursed my black old mother
And wished she were in hell,
I'm sorry for that evil wish
And now I wish her well.

My old man died in a fine big house.
My ma died in a shack.
I wonder were I'm going to die,
Being neither white nor black?

Okay, thank you Langston. Moving right along now:

Pablo Kicks It Down The Middle

I wanted to try to maintain consistency and say, I remember when I first read Pablo Neruda... But, I don't remember when that was. All I can tell you is that Pablo's awesome, so let's take a look at one of his poems:

In the night we shall go in

In the night we shall go in,
we shall go in to steal
a flowering, flowering branch.

We shall climb over the wall
in the darkness of the alien garden, two shadows in the shadow.

Winter is not yet gone,
and the apple tree appears
suddenly changed into
a fragment of cascade stars.

In the night we shall go in
up to its trembling firmament,
and your hands, your little hands
and mine will steal the stars.

And silently to our house
in the night and the shadow,
perfume's silent step,
and with starry feet,
the clear body of spring.

Wow, holy cow man! That's Pablo Neruda. Okay, I do remember when I first read Wallace Stevens. I believe that was 1990, and I was right here in Pennsylvania, and the book had a yellow cover, and I believe it was an anthology. Okay, let's take a look at Wallace's approach:

Wallace Kicks It In The Clouds

Poem Written at Morning

A sunny day's complete Poussiniana
Divide it from itself. It is this or that
And it is not.
By metaphor you paint
A thing. Thus, the pineapple was a leather fruit,
A fruit for p ewter, thorned and palmed and blue,
To be served by men of ice.
The senses paint
By metaphor. The juice was fragranter
Than wettest cinnamon. It was cribled pears
Dripping a morning sap.
The truth must be
That you do not see, you experience, you feel,
That the buxom eye brings merely its element
To the total thing, a shapeless giant forced
Upward.

Green were the curls upon that head.

Right From The HeArt: Write From The HeArt

Hopefully these examples have successfully portrayed the central idea of this essay. You see, these three Poets wrote quite differently from each other; and they are all great. And why? Because they're writing as only they can Write: right from the heArt about what matters to them. And, that approach is one that everyone is capable of following. It should be noted that I don't mean to stylistically pigeon-hole these three Poets. There were periods when Langston wrote in a much more abstract, thor oughly modern way, with abrupt phrasing, simultaneous voices, the whole deal. And, there are poems of Pablo that are quite straight-forward: similar to the Langston poem quoted above.

In conclusion, Write your poem: the one that only you are capable of writing. It will be beautiful. Believe me. Life is a miracle, and there's no time for moping. So, let's get out our notebooks and Write some poems!

Kemal Faruquee spends most of his time staring at clouds and talking to derelicts. He currently lives in Pennsylvania where he Writes books, makes paintings, develops websites, and runs The Creative Group and a Love Poems Website.


Author:: Kemal B. Faruquee
Keywords:: Art, Artist, Creative, Creative thinking, Poet, Poetry, Write, Writer
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Questions

When I am alone
I think of you
I remember your smell
And the things that you do
What are you doing
This moment that is here
Are you laughing I wonder
Yes I ponder, my dear
Do you think of me also
Id be interested to know
Do you wonder where I am
And what Im doing also
I Hope you are happy
I imagine you are
When were not together
You seem to be so far
When will I see you
Another thought of mine
Im Hoping its soon
Well, Ill find out in time
Will you phone me
To arrange our next date
Ill have to wait and see
And leave it all up to fate


I have been writing poetry for many years and regularly have it published in print. My poetry is published by Forward Press and in many other publications. So I'm now putting my poetry online. I publish my poetry on my Blog jo-hale-poetry at http://jo-hale-poetry.blogspot.com/ and on 8hop.com My poetry on 8hop.com. I also have information about my poetry at http://www.squidoo.com/jo-hale-poetry. I'm married to my husband Peter. I was born in May 1970 and am a Taurean star sign.


Author:: Joanne Hale
Keywords:: Questions, Love, Caring, Wondering, Togetherness, Hoping, Moments, Memories, Loving, in Love, Hope
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The Illomen of Istanbul A Dramatic Macabre Mytho in Poetic form about Achilles' Arrow

Poeta Laureado De la Ciudad de San Jeronimo Peru

The Ill-omen of Istanbul

[A Dramatic Macabre Mythos in Poetic form; About Achilles Arrow

I heard of a legend when I was in Istanbul, in 1996, it was of the Arrow of Achilles, lost someplace in Asia Minor; then I took a trip into Asia Minor, and went to Troy, and several other cities, thus comes this Poetic Mythos,

Part V End: the Parting

It was raining, raining ominous red rain
When I awoke early in the morning
Then, looking out my window came
A gray, gray dawnascending
Rising with the shadows,
Helen by their sides:
Happy I was, night had lift,
Took the cold, cold horror with it
(That brought me cold, cold sweats)
Shadows, shapes, imps and alike:
Like torn curtains, shifting away
All, now, in the distorted atmosphere
As I Looked out my windowgray light

This cold horror that was leaving slowly
This red, red ominous rain: gray shadows, Brooding: rippling drenched bodies:
I saw them gripping Achilles arrow
In a most brutish iron gripping way:
This red, red ominous arrow,
That brought horror, ringside:
Where within it, resided a legion of beings?
Of demonic raving, inept beings!
This red, red ominous arrow
That cast its spell on me

Part VI
The Afterward

I sucked in my breath, cleaned up a bit,
And went down stairs for morning breakfast
To join the group, with floundering suspicions;
Who never knew the whole of it,
Only that lull that stinging left jabs,
Like a weeping sponge,
Never more to know
But the pounding of the heart!

Part IV
Night Arrows

Im not sure, but I felt I was hallucinating
Or was I dreaming in my sleep?
Brooding over the darkness of the cliff,
On its plateau, surrounded by its woods
Within its cave, where shadows hung like bats
Hung over me, incessantly, as I ducked,
Where resided Achilles assaulting red arrow.
Silent, I felt my red flesh devour me
The silence became Deafening
(Bewildered, bemused, and confused)!

Ineffectual pawing, were the shapes
Hammering, as if I was the stake
I tried to shake them off:
Eerie evil: I told my body to awake
At the edge of my bed stood several
Of these Cliff dwellers, faceless:
Was I still in a dream state?

Sleeping, the Bed and Morning

I took a second glance at the clock
It was 3:30AM, where did the time go
Morning was close at hand, as this
Ghostly cult did their demonstration.
Then I heard a whisper, murmur:
Where is the red, red Arrow?
An evil face echoed with it.
The tone almost battering me,
Impervious to my brain
It cast it spell on mehostage
To frozen terror, gripping me,
Cold sweat dripping off of me,
Their smell rippled, swelled over me
With wild, Rhythmatical movements
Invoking: bl ood staggering to my heart
A driving force willing to murder me.
Where is the red, red Arrow? they cried,

[huskily in this heart-stirring game.

The Arrow, Murmur and Helen

Under the bed went my hand in search
And found the cursed arrowat last
The arrow had a murmur: in a language
I had never heard, said, in chamber tone:
We are the legion that Christ cast into the sows,
Taken out thereafter, now cast into this vile iron
Red, red arrow!! so spiraled this sounding drum
Of a voice, that begged to be released, and there
Beside my bed was the lovely and Helen naked.

As the woman lay on my desecrated bed,
Chanting to the arrow, as it inflected slashes,
Painful scratches, gashes: she bore them all:
This was not a dream, said the beauty queen,
Helen of Troy, dancing, wild and chanting,
As the slobbering ecstasy went on, with the
Blemished, devilish black browed snarling ghouls.

Gray D awn

I did what I had to do; gray dawn crept near
Hence, I lifted up the arrow
Unmistakably, they stopped chanting,
The arrow had a murmur: Helen, in my bed,
Now she pulled me in, Death was immanent,
I had done what they wantedsinned,
I then threw the Arrow at the six,
All voices emerged with, a salivating madness.

Part III Alien Artifact: Achilles Arrow

The arrow was but an artifact to Solomon,
Old Solomon the Muslim, from Cairo;
One with a bloody, deadly lineage, and legend;
But I wanted what was beyond the myth,
Beyond the connections of the Trojan War,
That had killed Achilles, and brought Troys ruin:
This Alien artifact, with human ken.

As we traveled through Asia Minor, strange were
The days, nights, visions and dreams:
Coming repeatedly, hideously vivid at times,
And there we were in the drums and fire,
Arrows shooting everywhereso the battles
Bellowed across my mi nd, hour after hour
As we traveled to find the Cave of the Arrow.
And in doing so, I left my tour of sorts,
Those folks I had come to know, in Istanbul.

I had left the tour for a spell, and when I had
Returned, was asked, Did you find
What you were looking for?
And I said, Of course!

The Cult/Aboriginal Ghouls

The fact roused, that we were being followed
Uneasiness came to ustourists on the bus!
No one made a connection to me, with them,
With these undesirable black-clocked barbarians;
This race following the bus, from far behind
Following us, these aboriginal ghouls, unfazed:
The arrow was perhaps their amulet for witchcraft
And the imprisoned demonic beings, but toys!
the captured living dead, Amulets to worship:
In this most frightening, unseen hypogeum.

Perhaps they felt I might set them free
For I had taken their Pandoras box (you see);
But my interests were not in ritu als, or alike:
Such as dancing in hotel corridors, as they.

In my sleep, I still dreamed of red ominous flesh
Burning scorched to oblivion; black magic;
Slaughtered women and babies, nightmares.

[Then: while in Samaria, I walked swiftly
By the docks: Merchants swayed,
Eyes silently engulfed eyes weighing me
Followed by the cults silver pale moo.
Their Voices, angry decreed:
The Arrows not yours to keep.

Part II Haunted, and Old Solomon

The morning after my arrival, I set out
To the valley where within, resided
A towering cliff, in search I went
For this legendary red iron arrow,
A few hours up and over the rocky slopes
In the valley beyond Troys reach
Here, face-to-face I stood in the cave
Douse in sweat: Solomon pointing to the arrow
Underneath the rockprotruding
There I pulled it out, took it, paid my guide well,
As he cursed the arrow from hell,
Then left, as he had come [Solomon.

There in the cave: signs of savage feasts
[Sacrifices: had taken place: animal, human bone
s,
Bits of stone weaponsbroken Skullsall around; Skulls, unimpeded bones; carvings on the walls
An ancient written language, to me unknown
Written in red flesh, by human bones.

Part I The Demonic Arrow

I was standing beneath the half ruined walls
Of the city-fortress, legend calls Troy
Felt the temper of the forces that once fought here
The dead seemed all around, red ominous flesh
Cloaked with horrified visions, and the arrow
That damn arrow, inside my mind.

I had learned the present valley inhabitants
Half invisible, ghoul filled souls, children and all
Were the aboriginal cults, Troys leftovers?
A degraded indigenous race; so others told me:
But Solomon knew well, they had a pack with hell
They were the keepers of the arrow.

I told you, its a demonic haunted item, said
Solo mon, of Cairo.
What is so evil about it, I exclaimed.
Yes, said old Solomon, I will take you to
the slopes, to the cliff, to the woods, to the
cave, there you will find your mad dream.

And so it was [and so it began: the Journey.

Part one and two written 6/25/06, evening; part three and four 6/26/06, at EP Caf; Part five and six, written 6/27/06, at home in Lima; revised 1 & 2 July 2006.

See Dennis' web site: http://dennissiluk.tripod.com


Author:: Dennis Siluk
Keywords:: Poetry
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The Promise

I held you in my arms
So gently
Looking into eyes the color
Of the earth's floor.
Hair a silk capped wonder,
Your breath an angel's kiss.
Softly I whispered to you,
Please, promise you'll never grow older.
Stay in my arms forever
And make all my dreams come true.

I held your little hand
So tightly
Eyes bright with wonder
Of the world
Hair sun kissed curls
Your voice singing a chorus of joy.
Softly I whispered a prayer,
Please, let her never grow older.
Let her stay in my arms forever,
And make all my dreams come true.

I rocked you in my arms
So lovingly
Eyes wet with new shed tears
Hair so soft beneath my fingers
Your voice filled with heartbroken emotion
You softly whispered to me,
Please, I don't want to grow older,
Let me stay here in your arms forever,
Because my dreams will never come true.

I held you in my arms
Just a moment
Eyes shining w ith love
Hair resplendent with flowers
Your voice alive with promise
Softly you whispered to him,
Please, let us grow older together,
Let me stay in your arms forever,
Together we will make dreams have come true.

You held her in your arms
So gently
Looking into each others eyes
Filled with love and joy
I held my breath as I listened
Softly you whispered to her,
Please, promise you'll never grow older,
Stay in my arms forever,
And make all my dreams come true.

You made all my dreams come true.

AE Wise is an author on Writing.Com which is located at http://www.Writing.Com/ and is accessible by anyone.


Author:: AE Wise
Keywords:: article submission, Articles, Writers, Writing, Publishing, Ezine, Email marketing, Email newsletter, Email
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Saturday, October 27, 2012

Just Dreaming

Stop it youre hurting me!
I heard the girl Scream
The image so real
Woke me from my Dream

I remembered the man
Id seen him before
Going into the shop
He came out of the door

It was nothing unusual
To pass in the store
So why was I Dreaming?
Of strangers and gore?

They say cheese makes you Dream
Bad images you will see
But I hadnt had cheese
So what else could it be?

Yes! That was it!
I know what it must be
Before going to bed
Id seen him on T.V!

Biography
Poetry
I have been writing poetry for many years and regularly have it published in print. My poetry is published by Forward Press and in many other publications. So I'm now putting my poetry online. I publish my poetry on my Blog jo-hale-poetry at http://jo-hale-poetry.blogspot.com/ and on 8hop.com My poetry on 8hop.com. I also have information about my poetry at http://www.squidoo.com/jo-hale-poetry. I'm marr ied to my husband Peter. I was born in May 1970 and am a Taurean star sign.
Age: 36
Gender: female
Astrological Sign: Gemini
Zodiac Year: Dog
Industry: Publishing
Occupation: poet
Location: Bristol England, United Kingdom

Other Interests
Reading poetry cinema animals music photography WW2 stories & memorabelia Day trips quizzes & puzzles.
Favourite Movies
Too many to mention - all depends on my mood. I like comedy thriller romance horror stand up comedy sci-fi etc.
Favourite Books
Again wide range in taste - comedy thriller horror sci-fi fantasy WW2 stories girlie poetry etc


Author:: Joanne Hale
Keywords:: Dreaming, Dream, Dreams, Nightmare, Fear, bad Dream, Sleep, Scream, Distress, Pain, Attack, Danger
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War Poems and Epigrams In Spanish and English

War Poems on Iraqi [And Three Epigrams

Section three

24.

1) The Color of War I

[Iraqi: war poem

I saw the other day
A little boy coloring away
(With crayons) in a sketch book;
With every colored pencil
Under the rainbow
And then some

And when I took a second look
I thought of the Iraqi war
(American and Allied soldiers)
And all the colors it stood for:

Red was for the blood theyve shed;
Gray, for depression of their families

Far away
Blue was for sad skies;
Black and white, for death and life;
Green, for the spoils weve not seen;
Brown, for the dry and dusty nights

All the soldiers had to fighton

Foreign ground.

I pleaded, for the boy to stop,
Surprised, he looked up at me
With his deep blue eyes, haunting

Me, he said, with a tear on his cheek:
I wanted to color the soldiers feet!
I looked and there it read: Peace
Already col ored-in, with gray:
Said the boy still looking at me:
Thats the way it came.

#1371 6/16/06

Here is an unusual war poem Dennis has written today, on the Iraqi war. He said after following it for four years, it is getting old; yet it sells papers doesnt it? He was for the war when it was a war, so he told me, but now it is not, it is more a police action, he explains to me, and feels perhaps we have overstayed our welcome. And what are the motivating factors now? he asks. He adds, When we get into questioning the motives, after a war, when they are not clear, it is perhaps time to leave Dennis being a Vietnam Veteran knows a little bit about how it all works; and here in this poem, he paints his picture of war, the Iraqi war, and how he sees the colors of war through color crayons of a little boy. Rosa Penaloza

Commentary on War: Im fifty-eight years old, and I cant remember a time when the United States was not at war, preparing for another wa r, or just getting over a war (not to include WWI and WWII); thus, weve had a busy half-century. I was but three years old when the Korean War broke out, in l950, and in 1953, when it was tranquilized. Then again in 1964, my friends went to Vietnam, and I in 1971, that war ended in 1975, an eleven year war. I thought wed have peace but we got a few more wars in-between (we always do); such as, in the 80s Haiti involvement, Granada, and some secret Central American things; nothing real big. And then we got Bosnia in the 90s, and a few other little East Europe wars to attend to (mixed with these wars we had Granada and a few African uprisings); always helping out Europe with their little squats, which they feel are important, and when it comes to American made squats, of course they are less important to them. Also in the 90s we got Iraqi I, and in the now 21st Century, weve had to contend with Afghanistan and Iraqi II. We are a country full of warlords to be sure. What w ill be next, between 2007 and 2016, as I had predicted in 1984, we will be in line with the onset of WWIII. We have been fighting it since l950, with Korea, now it is set in motion: the war on terror is part of it of course. When I say set in motion, I mean, things are going to fly. We already got Iran and Korea on the hot list; Syria is bordering it; and we are going to have to contend with the Arabs sneaking through South America to North America and lighting up a path once they got on solid ground. Russia and China are becoming economies with highbrow ideas; we may have ruled the 90s, but I fear, things will change, as often they do. Dlsiluk

Spanish Version

El Color de la Guerra

[Iraqu: poema de guerra

V el otro da
A un nio coloreando lejos
(Con crayones) en un libro de dibujo;
Con cada lpiz de color
Bajo el arco iris
Y luego unos

Y cuando mir de nuevo
Pens en la guerra iraqu
(Soldados americanos y aliados) Y todos los colores que esto signific:

Rojo era por la sangre que ellos vertieron;
Gris, por la depresin de sus familias
A lo lejos
Azul era por el cielo triste;
Blanco y negro, por muerte y vida;
Verde, por el despojo no hemos visto;
Marrn, por las oscuras y polvorientas noches
Todos los soldados tuvieron que lucharsobre
Tierra extranjera.

Supliqu, para que el muchacho se detuviera,
Sorprendido, l me mir alzando su vista
Con sus profundos ojos azules, atormentndome,
l dijo, con una lgrima sobre su mejilla:
Quise colorear los pies del soldado!
Mir y all ste deca: Paz
Ya coloreado en ste, con color gris:
Dijo el muchacho todava mirndome:
Esta es la forma en que vino.

# 1371 16/Junio/2006

Aqu est un poema inslito sobre guerra que Dennis ha escrito hoy, sobre la guerra iraqu. l dijo despus de haberla seguido durante cuatro aos, ...se esta volviendo vieja; pero an est en los peridicos, no? l estuvo de acuerdo con la guerra cuando era una guerra, eso l me dijo; pero ahora no lo es, esta es ms una accin policial, l me explica, y siente quizs que hemos abusado de nuestra bienvenida. Y cuales son los factores de motivacin ahora? l pregunta. l aade, Cuando entramos a preguntarnos los motivos, despus de una guerra, cuando estos no son claros, ste es quizs tiempo para marcharse Dennis siendo un Veterano de Vietnam conoce un poquito sobre cmo esto funciona; y aqu en este poema, l pinta su cuadro de guerra, la guerra iraqu, y cmo l ve los colores de guerra a traves de los lpices de colores de un nio. Rosa Pealoza.

Comentario sobre la Guerra: Tengo cincuentiocho aos, y no puedo recordar un tiempo cuando los Estados Unidos no estaban en guerra, preparndose para otra guerra, o justo saliendo de una guerra (sin incluir la Primera y Segunda Guerra Mundial); as, hemos tenido un medio siglo ocupado. Tena tan slo tres aos cuando la Guerra coreana estall en 1950, y en 1953 cuando fue tranquilizada. Entonces otra vez en 1964, mis amigos fueron a Vietnam, y yo en 1971, aquella guerra termin en 1975, una guerra de once aos. Pens que tendramos paz pero tuvimos ms guerras en el intermedio (siempre lo hacemos); como las de, en la participacin de Hait en los aos 80, Granada, y algunas cosas secretas centroamericanas; nada verdadero grande. Y luego tuvimos Bosnia en los aos 90, y otras pequeas guerras que asistir en el Este de Europa (mezcladas con estas guerras tuvimos Granada y algunos levantamientos africanos); siempre ayudando a Europa en sus pequeas ocupaciones, que ellos sienten son importante, y pasa que cuando America hace ocupaciones, desde luego estos son menos importantes para ellos. Tambin en los aos 90 tuvimos la Guerra Iraqu I, y en el ahora siglo XXI, hemos tenido que competir con Afganistn y la Guerra Iraqu II. Somos un pas lleno de jefes militares para estar seguros. Qu ser el siguiente periodo, entre 2007 y 2016, co mo lo haba predicho en 1984, estaremos en fila con el comienzo de WWIII. Hemos estado luchndolo desde 1950, con Corea, ahora esta puesto en movimiento: la guerra de terror es parte de ello desde luego. Cuando digo puesto en movimiento, quiero decir, las cosas van a volar. Ya conseguimos Irn y Corea en la lista caliente; Siria colinda con ste; y vamos a tener que competir con los rabes que se mueven a Norteamrica a traves de Sudamrica y encendiendo un camino una vez que ellos se pongan en terreno firme. Rusia y China se estan volviendo economas con ideas intelectuales; podemos haber gobernado los aos 90, pero me temo, que las cosas cambiarn, como a menudo lo hacen. Dlsiluk

25.

2) After the Dawn of War II

[Iraqi 2006

I looked over the shoulder of the world

Through its crawling fog
And heard the cold cries

Seen the stir in the eyes
Heard the trumpets of war

Breaking the silence of dawn

(Heard somebody say):
Soldiers w ill die today

For Iraqi Liberty
That thou endure.

#1371 6/16/2006

Spanish Version

Despus del Alba de Guerra
[Iraqu 2006

Mir sobre el hombro del mundo
A traves de su niebla que avanza lentamente
Y o los gritos del fro
V el movimiento en los ojos
O las trompetas de guerra
Rompiendo el silencio del alba
(O alguien que dice):
Los soldados morirn hoy
Por la Libertad Iraqu
Que t soportas.

# 1371 16/Junio/2006

26.

3) War Flag III

(Post Iraqi)

Lone are the days and short

Before the next cruel war
What spirit then shall fill a sweet despair?
To wave the flag of warand say:

Im ready and here!

#1372 6/16/2006

Spanish Version

Bandera de Guerra

(Puesto Iraqu)

Solitario son los das y cortos
Antes de la siguiente guerra cruel
Qu espritu entonces llenar una desesperacin dulce?
Para agitar la bandera de guerra...y decir:

Aqu estoy y Listo!

# 1372 16/Junio/2006

War Epigrams

Someone said on TV, America Loves war, I say, America loves peace, and to have peace, you better be ready to fight a war. #1401

In the real world, every terrorist group, every and dictator knows, should you show your weak spot (like in boxing or Karate), expect a blow right therea knockout punch or kick. If you have no weak spots, you best guard everything, because theyll be trying to make one. #1402

The loser in war can never complain he got a raw deal, lest he want his head cut off; so you best win. #1403

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Author:: Dennis Siluk
Keywords:: Poetry and Commentary
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Winter Magic

Dear Santa Claus,

My brother Franky (who can't

write at all) would like a new

blanky, his has a big hole. My

sister Susanne (who is too shy

to ask) would like a new dress

so the school kids won't laugh.

Mommy could use a nice cooking

pot , the bottom's all round on

the one that she's got. A nice

pair of shoes for Dad would be

neat, looking for work is hard

on his feet. The money I saved

will be right on the table. I know

you are real and not just a fable.

Love,

Cindy

Crystal Magic

I wake: listening to the absence of sound;

Curtains which in silver light be-gowned

Reflect moonlight playing splintery shards

On diamond ice like blue-white stars.

The valley below is still and bright

With sharp air drenched in God's snowlight.

.

Snow

The time has come to start a season,

To heal a mad-dash Autumn's lesions.< /p>

The sun spent earth resists the flakes -

Insistent notes like music makes

The thirsty ground a pillowcase.

Sharp winds elicit needed sighs

As inch by inch the Autumn dies -

Replaced by comfort mountains high.

The sleeping earth will gather strength

As nature waits for Springtime's pranks.

A retired portrait photographer, I write simple poems about every day emotions.


Author:: Kenneth C. Hoffman
Keywords:: Winter, Poetry
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Why?

Why does the grass make my feet wet as I walk in the morn just begun?
And Why is it green, not blue, or pink, or golden like the sun?
Why do the waves on the river make patterns as they flow?
And Why do swans float against the tide, when the other ways easier to go?
What makes a squirrel climb a tree and Why do birds learn to fly?
And Why do crabs walk sideways and dont get sand it its eye!
Why do fish swim together, instead of swimming alone?
And Why dont they bump one another, Why dont they shout or groan?
What makes the sea so salty? What makes the sun so bright?
What makes the sun shine for me today
And the moon come out at night?
Why do the stars to twinkle and What makes a baby smile?
And Why must I Ask Why all the while!


I write about everyday occurrences and events that have either happened to me or to others. I had my first poem published in a magazine when I was 10 years old since then I hav e had poems published in a variety of things, and over the past few years, quite a few in anthologies with Forward Press and others.

I have been writing poetry for many years and regularly have it published in print. My poetry is published by Forward Press and in many other publications. So I'm now putting my poetry online. I publish my poetry on my Blog jo-hale-poetry at http://jo-hale-poetry.blogspot.com/ and on 8hop.com My poetry on 8hop.com. I also have information about my poetry at http://www.squidoo.com/jo-hale-poetry. I'm married to my husband Peter. I was born in May 1970 and am a Taurean star sign.


Author:: Joanne Hale
Keywords:: Why, Questions, What, Ask, Wonder, Think, Question, Thinking, Wondering, Asking, Thought, Curious
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"Old North State" "Bob Said GoodBye" and "One Day"

Old North State

Where I come from
The grass is very soft
Mama's Homemade wine is strong

Where I come from
The train tracks divide the town
Like the Great Wall of China

Where I come from
White and Black folk are kin
But they don't speak of this proud lineage

Where I come from
We scream and scream
And we scream some more

Where I come from
There are no Queers, since
Kinfolk like me best in Cali

Where I come from
Whites pity Blacks
Mothers pity unmarried daughters
Fathers pity unruly sons and

Where I come from
Everyone Loves and hates Queers

Bob Said Goodbye

And this time he meant it

No, not waiting
nor wanting God,
family, or friends
to come to
the rescue

There was but one solutions

Bob said goodbye
he did not
look back

He did not
care to think
himself selfish
while sitting in
the bathtub
unconscious
nor did he worry
about all those left
behind to deal
with his decision

He was bold and brave
he did not
waiver
clear and decisive
till the end when

Bob said goodbye

ONE DAY

-Ramekon O'Arwisters

Dragging your long wavy hair

Down my face, tingling as

The ends touch my skin

Down toward my chest

Down, down still further

Your face hidden in my lap

Your hair now a mountain

How round and

Smooth the peak

How perfect the slope

How happy I am


Author:: Ramekon O'Arwisters
Keywords:: North Carolina, South, Home, Queer, Gay, Black, african american, Love, Rejection, Hope, Depression
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Friday, October 26, 2012

The Butterfly Urn a poem

Ashes, that is all I amlooking up at you;

whose the fool? I take up such little space, inside this little

urn youd think I was a butterfly, in a

cocoon. Just keep me if you wish, in a corner of a

room in your home: I wont say muchI got many other things

to do.

#1374 6/22/2006

Note: The urn is preferred for many reasons in considering a proper burial; and as in many Asian countries it is kept in a home (as in Japan); some timesas in Cambodia, bones are kept (of the loved ones) in a little open-ended shelter in the backyard of a home (folks have been kind enough to show them, and allowed me to touch, and hold them, they feel they are residue spirits in a way), most made out of wood. It provides a closeness you will never get, putting a loved one in a cemetery, that most people never go to after the day they bury the person. In some cases this is perhaps good, depending on your memories of the person. In Peru, people do go to cemet eries quite often, an exception to the rule. And in Haiti, where I spent some time, a cemetery is preferred, they save all their money for such an event, it is like a holiday, another exception. But in America, they cant wait to put you in the ground, call the insurance company up, and run outside and celebrate, spend the money, and will never step a foot back in that old graveyard again.

On one hand it is a cheap burial compared to the grand tomb, of modern man, costing between $10,000 to $30,000-dollars; in Minnesota you can do a service, nice Urn, and cremation for $1400-dollars, and take the urn home for everlasting warmth. Young Americans think this a tragedy, and so do some Peruvians, it only proves one thing, their inexperienced limits of the world: they think they live in a one-world parking lot.

See Dennis' web site: http://dennissiluk.tripod.com


Author:: Dennis Siluk
Keywords:: Poetry
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Three Poems from the Story: "Kush"

Berenikes Majesty

The loveliness that crowned her youth,
Swept the grounds with all its roots;
With gentle years and womanhood
With lazy-days and laughs of grace;
Now passes by her majesty.

Her breasts triumphant for a life of flesh
Defiant in her pose, Love was captured,
And love was lost, but proudly her child
Did growHer childs her victory, Her
New tranquil majesty.

#1055 1/3/06 Chapter #15,
of: The Sylphlike of Alexandra

Sinful Games

Stubborn, are our sins
Faint, is our memory
Of them!...
Like a vapor, that
Surrounds our will;
Tears do not cleanse
Our sins,
Only covers them.

We sink through shadows
Nibbling, here and there;
Sly we think we are
With our hidden desires.
We squeeze the juices
Out of our brains
To play lifes sinful games.

#1056 1/3/06 Part of Chapter #16, of: The Sylphlike of Alexandra 278 BC

Coldhearted Swan

I wil l not cry, the child-bride scorned
Silent as stone, to marry a man
so very, very old.
Im so-beautiful, she cried, eyes
Wide, her heart in protest:
Father must I marry, in a haunted
pose, she arouse.
Lifes near fair in eternal splendor;
But not so, in the real world.
And like a swan, she covered
Her wings, and become his trophy
his cold-hearted thing.

#0157 1/4/06: from the story Kush, Land of he Bow, Part Two to The Sylphlike of Alexandra 525 BC, Chapter #5

See Dennis' web site: http://dennissiluk.tripod.com see http://www.alibris.com for Dennis' books


Author:: Dennis Siluk
Keywords:: Poetry
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Robert Burns Love Poem: "A Red Red Rose"

Robert Burns, a poor man, an educated man, and a ladies man, is representative of Scotland, much like whisky, haggis, bagpipes, and kilts. He lived a life shortened by rheumatic heart disease, 1759-1796, but his life journey through poverty, informal education, disappointed Love, nationalism, and literary and financial success can be identified by all Scots and common men the world over. He has become almost a national symbol of all things Scottish. His life is like a Love story with a happy ending.

The Poet, Robert Burns

Robert Burnss family raised seven children on sparse, rented farmland on the west coast of Scotland. The family cottage still stands as a proud tourist attraction. The family farm was not successful and the family moved from farm to farm. Life on the farm in western Scotland was harsh and Robert worked long hours with his father.

Burns father recognized the value of education and he managed to hire a local teacher to tutor Robert. He was an extremely bright student, mastering Shakespeare, current poets, French, Latin, philosophy, politics, geography, theology, and mathematics. His father read the Bible during the evenings around the cottage fireplace and Robert became an expert on the Bible and a devout Church member.

Robert Burns wrote his first poem at age 15. The poem was called Handsome Nell and was about his first Love for a girl named Nellie Blair. Throughout his life, Burns was a charming and witty man, attracting the attention of numerous women. A dozen or more women can be identified as the inspiration for various poems. Burns wrote many famous Love poems, including A Red, Red Rose and One Fond Kiss.

Heres an excerpt from Handsome Nell.

O once I Loved a bonnie lass,
Aye, and I Love her still;
And whilst that virtue warms my breast,
Ill Love my handsome Nell.

Burns, in a later comment on this poem, stated that he had never had the least thought or inclination of t urning poet till I got once heartily in Love, and then rhyme and song were, in a manner, the spontaneous language of my heart.

The Turning Point

In 1786, at age 27, Robert Burns went through a major turning point in his life. He suffered a disappointing Love affair with Jean Armour, who was pregnant with his twin sons. The local community and Armours father were outraged by the affair and her father rejected Burnss offer of marriage.

Dejected and depressed, Burns made plans to leave Scotland and sail to Jamaica in the West Indies. To finance the trip, Burns submitted a volume of his Poetry for publication.

The publication of 612 copies in a simple, unbound volume was called Poems, Chiefly in the Scottish Dialect, also sometimes known as The Kilmarnock Edition. The poems were well received in Edinburgh by socialites who were enchanted by the poems and amazed that a poor farmer could write so well.

So, instead of planning his escape to a new world , Burns planned a trip to Edinburgh. His confident manner, ingratiating style, and his obvious wit and intelligence brought Burns popularity and admiration. Soon, a second publication of his work was executed in Edinburgh.

The Growing Popularity

During his stay in Edinburgh, Robert Burns met printer James Johnson, who planned a project to print all of the folk songs in Scotland. This project enthralled Burns and embarked upon a journey throughout Scotland to collect as many folk songs as possible. Burns collected over 300 songs and wrote a few himself, including A Red, Red Rose.

One of the results of his travels throughout Scotland was that Robert Burns ingratiated himself to everyone he met and he rose to national prominence and popularity.

The collected songs were published by Johnson in six volumes and by George Thomson in a five volume set.

Another happy outcome of this turning point in Robert Burnss life is that he was able to return home and marry his beLoved Jean Armour, now with the blessing of her family.

Robert Burns continued to collect and write songs for The Scots Musical Museum, an anthology of traditional Scottish lyrical poems, until his untimely death from rheumatic heart disease in 1796.

Within a few years of his death groups of Robert Burnss friends and fans gathered to promote his memory and to celebrate his life. By 1801, five years after his death, groups met on the anniversary of his death, but later they began to meet on the anniversary of his birth, January 25. Now there are many Burns clubs and societies who celebrate his memory with dinners, including haggis, and readings of his works.

The Poem, A Red, Red Rose

One of the most famous songs that Robert Burns wrote for this project and first published in 1794 was A Red, Red Rose. Burns wrote it as a traditional ballad, four verses of four lines each.

A Red, Red Rose begins with a quatrain containing two simil es. Burns compares his Love with a springtime blooming rose and then with a sweet melody. These are popular poetic images and this is the stanza most commonly quoted from the poem.

The second and third stanzas become increasingly complex, ending with the metaphor of the sands of life, or hourglass. One the one hand we are given the image of his Love lasting until the seas run dry and the rocks melt with the sun, wonderfully poetic images. On the other hand Burns reminds us of the passage of time and the changes that result. That recalls the first stanza and its image of a red rose, newly sprung in June, which we know from experience will change and decay with time. These are complex and competing images, typical of the more mature Robert Burns.

The final stanza wraps up the poems complexity with a farewell and a promise of return.

A Red, Red Rose is written as a ballad with four stanzas of four lines each. Each stanza has alternating lines of four beats, or iambs, and three beats. The first and third lines have four iambs, consisting of an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable, as in da-dah, da-dah, da-dah, da-dah. The second and fourth lines consist of three iambs. This form of verse is well adapted for singing or recitation and originated in the days when Poetry existed in verbal rather than written form.

A Red, Red Rose
by Robert Burns

O my Luve's like a red, red rose.
That's newly sprung in June;
O my Luve's like a melodie
That's sweetly play'd in tune.

As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in Luve am I;
And I will Love thee still, my Dear,
Till a'the seas gang dry.

Till a' the seas gang dry, my Dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun:
I will Luve thee still, my Dear,
While the sands o'life shall run.

And fare thee weel my only Luve!
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my Luve,
Tho' it were ten tho usand mile!

*****************************

Garry Gamber is a public school teacher and entrepreneur. He writes articles about real estate, health and nutrition, and internet dating services. He is the owner of http://www.Anchorage-Homes.com and http://www.TheDatingAdvisor.com.


Author:: Garry Gamber
Keywords:: Robert Burns, Love poem, Poetry, A Red Red Rose, Scotland, Love, Luve
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Whimsical Angel Drawings and a One Winged Angel Conquer All Or None

I will take in the sky
and hold it's beautiful offerings.
I will collect whimsical angels.
A one winged angel I will be.

I project the strokes it takes to paint this fairy.
I will push out colors
my palette close at hand.
My one winged angel
disguised at times
her identity to be revealed.

I sift through all my seeds
sort out the ones that will give new life
and watch the rest
fly softly into the wind
to safely find their way.

I reached beyond a rainbow
and drench myself in fairy dust.
I gathered mermaid pictures.
and magical mystical creatures.
I read legends of mermaids.
I had debates about enlightenment.
I heard tales from the lips of angels.
I am a fantasy wild woman,
a one winged angel.
I take out my crayons and make
tiny whimsical angel drawings.

I am a tiny fairy
a one winged angel
anything that strikes my fancy.
I am everythi ng I decide to include
in my journal each and every day.
Words on pages
illustrations of my mood.
A one winged angel
or a culmination of visions.

I will paint whimsical musicians
and beautiful women.
I will sculpt a castle and live there at will.
I will gather letters from the tooth fairy
keep them in a wooden case for emergencies.
I will create a cabaa
serve chocolate eclairs and tea.
I will share my blessed cookbook
and quote affirmations of love.
I will post fairy coloring pages
set them in line
color them when I fell bored.
I will cut out paper dolls
that only dance at midnight.
I will find dragons, capture their fire
and warm my toes on cold days.
Goddess of art
a tale for today
I coast
I spin
I coat my visions with creativity.
Whimsical angel drawings
fantasy art of a goddess
I am or long to be.

Innocent angels
I gave you a key?
I opened the door often
so that you dear friends
would remember me.
There are no debates
about finding enlightenment
this window has never had curtains.
Samples of love affirmations
tied with bright and colorful ribbons
reminded me.

I am a one winged angel
and in my hand
I still have the treasures that sparked it all
my beautiful whimsical angel drawings
held fastly with my one free hand.

About the Author:

Kathy Ostman-Magnusen Hawaii, United States

Aloha! I am a figurative artist and Illustrator. If you check out my website you will see that I am very prolific in oils. My paintings are collected worldwide. I also do sculpture; images available upon request. I have illustrated for Hay House Inc. , Neil Davidson, who was considered for the Pulitzer Prize in feature writing, and several other publications. I also enjoy story writing and Poetry. All of the paintings,stories and poems on my blogs and website are written by me.

Check out my website http://www.kathysart.com or one of my blogs at: http://kathysart.blogspot.com/

Aloha


Author:: Kathy Ostman-Magnusen
Keywords:: whimsical angel drawings,one winged angel,legends of mermaids
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An Analysis of the Poem "You're"

When your eyes first rest on the title, Youre, your first thought is that the writer is talking about someone other than herself. Actually it seems that the writer is going to proceed and describe you! But on reading the poem you realize that it is really an abstract poem, she never really states who she is talking to.

The poem is divided into two stanzas, each with nine lines exactly. It is a short yet thorough poem. I noticed that Plath has once again used nine lines in each stanza, as she did in Tulips, and nine is known to be a death number. So once we look at this poem we could relate it with death once again, that is without reading it. The poem's form is rather regular, as the lines are all equal and this creates a very parallel plain effect.

The opening line of the poem is kind of confusing. It is a simile, it says, clown like, happiest on your hands, sometimes clowns are related with evilness. Personally they give me the creeps; on the other hand they are happy and joyous. When she says 'happiest on your hands, feet to the stars, I picture one doing a handstand. So the clown was probably meant in a good way, doing a trick. Gilled like a fish, once again is a simile, which suggests that the way this 'person' breathes is very soft like a small fish. Fish have small gills, and therefore this could mean that the person is young. They have soft gestures and actions.

The poem goes on with a metaphor, comparing this individual with a dodo bird. Whilst doing the handstand their thumbs are down like a dodo bird does. A dodo sometimes is used to describe someone 'stupid', in this context it could mean the person is not and therefore stupid to the outside world. It then goes on to describe this person further with another simile, wrapped up in yourself like a spool, suggests that this person is in their own world and doesn't have a care in the world. Also she was depressed and depressed people are often within themselves. This could also mean she was talking about herself.

The next line is related to the previous one mute as a turnip, this person is within himself or she they are so quiet like a turnip, and turnips have no feelings or emotions. This is also a simile and this person is constantly quiet, because she says from the fourth of July to All Fools Day. This subsequent line gives me the impression that she is talking about one of her children because she says O high riser, my little loaf. She possibly referred to one of her children as her little loaf.

This now brings me to the second stanza of the poem. This stanza is also full of similes. Vague as fog and looked for like mail, suggests that this person was very hard to speak to and to relate to, and they were so far away Farther off than Australia. This human being was still small like a bud and hardly noticed like a sprat in a pickle jug. This person is very ductile they are like a clean slate, which could easily be broken.< /p>

The poem does not have a rhyme, or a rhythm. The tone is very happy at first with the 'clown' but goes on to being lonely as she describes this person's distinctiveness.

This now brings me to my conclusion. I personally did not enjoy this poem. To me there was a very sinister and empty feeling, which made me very depressed. It was very descriptive with all the use of similes and metaphors.

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Author:: Sharon White
Keywords:: article submission, Articles, Writers, Writing, Publishing, Ezine, Email marketing, Email newsletter, Email
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